correction des dialogues anglophones d'astra failed, post-tutorial et ship presentation #168

dialogs/timelines/gameplay_related/demeter_astra_failed.dtl

@@ -8,14 +8,14 @@ demeter: It seems that you ran out of energy.[pause=0.5].[pause=0.5]. #id:20
 - I'm doing my best ! #id:23
 demeter: It's ok [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ![pause=0.5] I have spent years waiting for this moment,[pause=0.2] I can wait more ! #id:24
 demeter: I found you a new body,[pause=0.2] and a new ship is waiting for you outside,[pause=0.2] but I'm afraid I couldn't get your seeds.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] I hope you'll find new ones ! #id:25
-demeter: Do you need some advices ? #id:26
+demeter: Do you need some advice ? #id:26
 - No, I'm ok. #id:27
 - Can I have some explanations on how all of this works again ? #id:28
 	demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.2] you will reach a little yellowish zone.[pause=0.3] It's a [b]fertile zone[/b],[pause=0.3] brought back by the [color=#119758][b]Talion's[/b][/color] power.[pause=0.5] You can only plant [b]seeds[/b] in this zone. #id:29
 	demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you have to get [b]seeds[/b].[pause=0.5] To do so,[pause=0.2] just take your shovel and smash some stones ![pause=0.5] Focus on those having yellow crystals on it,[pause=0.3] these are [color=#119758][b]Talion veins[/b][/color]. #id:2a
 	demeter: Each time you use a tool like the shovel or plant a seed,[pause=0.2] you will spend one [b]energy[/b] charge.[pause=0.5] When you are out of it,[pause=0.2] just go recharge it at the [b]recharge station[/b].[pause=0.5] You will find it near the entrance of the base. #id:2b
 	demeter: Each time you recharge,[pause=0.2] a day will pass,[pause=0.3] your batteries are very inefficient.[pause=0.5] While the day is passing,[pause=0.3] plants will grow !
-	demeter: You have to produce enough [b]plant points[/b] to fill the [color=#FFA617]Internode's[/color] tanks.[pause=0.5] Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. #id:2c
+	demeter: You have to produce enough [b]plant points[/b] to fill the tanks of the [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color].[pause=0.5] Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. #id:2c
 	demeter: Oh ! [pause=0.3] I almost forgot,[pause=0.3] some plants can [b]mutate[/b].[pause=0.5] These [b]mutations[/b] alter the points and behavior of the plant affected.[pause=0.5] [b]Mutations[/b] can appear while [b]harvesting[/b] mature plants and even become more powerful if you [b]harvest[/b] an already mutated one. #id:2d
 demeter: Hope I helped. #id:2e
 demeter: I'm sending you an elevator,[pause=0.3] see you soon ! #id:2f

dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_post_tutorial.dtl

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ demeter: It will be long,[pause=0.3] but I know you can do it.[pause=0.5] It is
 		demeter: You are very kind [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ! #id:5c
 	- Are you hiding information from me ? #id:5d
 		demeter: Not at all ![pause=0.5] Please believe me,[pause=0.2] I just want you to join me.[pause=0.5].[pause=0.5]. #id:5e
-demeter: Travel south,[pause=0.3] join me at [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color].[pause=0.5] I will tell you everything you need to know when you are here,[pause=0.3] until then,[pause=0.2] keep your best seeds and continue to [b]evolve your plants[/b],[pause=0.3] you will need them as advanced as possible. #id:5f
+demeter: Travel south,[pause=0.3] join me at [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color].[pause=0.5] I will tell you everything you need to know when you are here,[pause=0.3] until then,[pause=0.2] keep your best seeds and continue to [b]develop your plants[/b],[pause=0.3] you will need them as advanced as possible. #id:5f
 demeter: Good luck [color=#FFA617]{orchidName}[/color],[pause=0.3] I am counting on you. #id:60
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dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_ship_presentation.dtl

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ demeter: You are surely wondering where we are now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3]. #id:
 - Sorry, but what is the point of all of that ? #id:6a
 	 demeter: I'm sorry that you are lost my child.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] Just know that what you are doing is very important to me and the planet itself.[pause=0.5] Since humans are gone,[pause=0.2] we kinda all fell into despair... #id:6b
 demeter: Wait.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] You don't know what humans are ![pause=0.5] Of course,[pause=0.2] since your database was corrupted I had to erase most of it. #id:6c
-demeter: Humans are living creatures that are.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] Different than plants.[pause=0.5] They are mostly thinking and moving like us.[pause=0.5] Somehow,[pause=0.2] they are very cute creatures,[pause=0.2] that only live for less than a century. #id:6d
+demeter: Humans are living creatures that are.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] Different from plants.[pause=0.5] They are mostly thinking and moving like us.[pause=0.5] Somehow,[pause=0.2] they are very cute creatures,[pause=0.2] that only live for less than a century. #id:6d
 demeter: One human is relatively intelligent,[pause=0.2] but don't be fooled,[pause=0.2] together,[pause=0.2] they did great things.[pause=0.5] In fact,[pause=0.2] they created us. #id:6e
 demeter: A long time ago,[pause=0.2] they discovered this planet.[pause=0.5] It was very different,[pause=0.2] plants were thriving everywhere ![pause=0.5] But then.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] they.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] I.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] #id:6f
 - What ? #id:70