correction des dialogues "astra failed" et "intro" #168

dialogs/timelines/gameplay_related/demeter_astra_failed.dtl

@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ demeter: I found you a new body,[pause=0.2] and a new ship is waiting for you ou
 demeter: Do you need some advices ? #id:18
 - No, I'm ok. #id:19
 - Can I have some explanations on how all of this works again ? #id:1a
-	demeter: When you start a region,[pause=0.2] search for the [b]Recharge Station[/b], there is always one near. #id:9c
+	demeter: When you enter a region,[pause=0.2] search for a [b]Recharge Station[/b], there is always one near. #id:9c
-	demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you'll have to find seeds by smashing some [b]Talion Veins[/b] in the stones with your shovel. #id:9d
+	demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you'll have to find seeds. Just smash some [b]Talion Veins[/b] in the stone with your shovel. #id:9d
-	demeter: You can then plant seeds in the yellow moss you'll find on the ground, it's the only [b]Fertile Zones[/b]. #id:9e
+	demeter: Then, you can plant seeds in the yellow moss you'll find on the ground, it's the only [b]Fertile Zones[/b]. #id:9e
-	demeter: When you are out of [b]Energy[/b], you can recharge on the [b]Recharge Station[/b], time will pass and plants will grow. #id:9f
+	demeter: When you are out of [b]Energy[/b], you can recharge it on the [b]Recharge Station[/b], time will pass and plants will grow. #id:9f
-	demeter: Each seed is different by their [b]Mutations[/b], and you can get same or better seed from a plant by destroying it when mature, or waiting the end of their lifetime. #id:a0
+	demeter: Each seed is different thanks to their [b]Mutations[/b], and you can get identical or better seeds from a plant by destroying it when mature, or by waiting the end of their lifetime. #id:a0
-	demeter: Plants generate [b]Plant Points[/b] when mature, get enough plant points to fill the reservoir of the [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color]. #id:a1
+	demeter: Plants generate [b]Plant Points[/b] when mature, get enough plant points to fill the tanks of the [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color]. #id:a1
 	demeter: Hope I helped. #id:21
 demeter: I'm sending you an elevator,[pause=0.3] see you soon ! #id:22
 audio "res://common/audio_manager/assets/sfx/dialogs/sfx/closing_transmission.wav"

dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_intro.dtl

@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ demeter: With the [color=#119758][b]Talion[/b][/color] back on the surface,[paus
 demeter: But first things first,[pause=0.3] you have to learn how everything is working up here,[pause=0.2] and how to use the [color=#119758][b]Talion[/b][/color] to plant seeds. #id:36
 demeter: [b]Just remember the following[/b] #id:37
 label explanations #id:38
-demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.2] search for the [b]Recharge Station[/b], I think there is one near the entrance. #id:a2
+demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.2] search for a [b]Recharge Station[/b], I think there is one near the entrance. #id:a2
-demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you'll have to find seeds by smashing some [b]Talion Veins[/b] in the stones with your shovel. #id:a3
+demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you'll have to find seeds. Just smash some [b]Talion Veins[/b] in the stone with your shovel. #id:a3
-demeter: You can then plant seeds in the yellow moss you'll find on the ground, it's the only [b]Fertile Zones[/b]. #id:a4
+demeter: Then, you can plant seeds in the yellow moss you'll find on the ground, it's the only [b]Fertile Zones[/b]. #id:a4
-demeter: When you are out of [b]Energy[/b], you can recharge on the [b]Recharge Station[/b], time will pass and plants will grow. #id:a5
+demeter: When you are out of [b]Energy[/b], you can recharge it on the [b]Recharge Station[/b], time will pass and plants will grow. #id:a5
-demeter: Each seed is different by their [b]Mutations[/b], and you can get same or better seed from a plant by destroying it when mature, or waiting the end of their lifetime. #id:a6
+demeter: Each seed is different thanks to their [b]Mutations[/b], and you can get identical or better seeds from a plant by destroying it when mature, or by waiting for the end of their lifetime. #id:a6
-demeter: Plants generate [b]Plant Points[/b] when mature, get enough plant points and you'll complete the training. #id:a7
+demeter: Plants generate [b]Plant Points[/b] when mature, get enough plant points and you'll complete your training. #id:a7
 - That's a lot of information, can you repeat ? #id:3f
 	demeter: Ok,[pause=0.2] listen carefully. #id:40
 	jump explanations