diff --git a/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_introV2.dtl b/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_introV2.dtl
index 8234f86..4750c51 100644
--- a/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_introV2.dtl
+++ b/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_introV2.dtl
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ demeter: Hi ![pause=0.3] Phew,[pause=0.2] I thought no one would reply.[pause=0.
 	demeter: Don't worry,[pause=0.2] you are in a subterranean base,[pause=0.2] but you will get to the surface very soon.
 - Wait ! Who am I ?
 	demeter: Hmmm.[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4] Interesting question.[pause=0.3] I elaborated your system but I don't know in which frame you are currently in.[pause=0.3] We'll find out !
-demeter: I'm glad you are finally awake ![pause=0.3] To be honest,[pause=0.2] I wasn't sure I would be able to make you function normally.[pause=0.5] Your frame is a very old model.
+demeter: I'm glad you are finally awake ![pause=0.3] To be honest,[pause=0.2] I wasn't sure I would be able to make you function normally.[pause=0.5] Your frame has remained here for eons without any maintenance.
 - Did you create me ?
 	demeter: Sort of ![pause=0.3] I didn't manufactured your body,[pause=0.2] I borrowed it,[pause=0.2] but I designed your cognitive system.[pause=0.3] Be forgiving,[pause=0.2] it won't be perfect,[pause=0.2] I was designed to manage,[pause=0.2] not to create.
 - Why did you awake me ?