amélioration des dialogues en anglais et suppression des oiseaux de l'ambiance Demeter

dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_ship_presentation.dtl

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-demeter: Hi again! You did well up there! #id:61
+demeter: Hi again ![pause=0.5] You did well up there ! #id:61
 demeter: Perhaps I should introduce myself now. #id:62
-demeter: I am.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] was,[pause=0.3] the Deputy Manager of Engineering and Talion Energy Research on this planet,[pause=0.5] but my creators and colleagues quickly called me [color=#009bff]Demeter[/color]. #id:63
-demeter: I am installed at the [color=#E30022]Astra[/color] base,[pause=0.2] in the third server room of the east wing,[pause=0.2] from which I oversee.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] oversaw,[pause=0.3] all the important operations on this planet. #id:64
-demeter: Maybe you are wondering where we are now... #id:65
-- Yes among a lot of other questions ! So where am I ? #id:66
-	 demeter: You're actually in an old human base, called Borea. This room is connected with the room you were born, but I made you pass by the surface to test your capacities. #id:67
+demeter: I am.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] was,[pause=0.2] the Deputy Manager of Engineering and Talion Energy Research on this planet,[pause=0.5] but my creators and colleagues quickly called me [color=#009bff]Demeter[/color]. #id:63
+demeter: I am installed at the [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color] base,[pause=0.2] in the third server room of the east wing,[pause=0.2] from which I oversee.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] oversaw,[pause=0.3] all the important operations on this planet. #id:64
+demeter: You are surely wondering where we are now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3]. #id:65
+- Yes, among a lot of other questions ! So where am I ? #id:66
+	 demeter: You're actually in an ancient human base,[pause=0.2] called [color=#E30022]Astra[/color].[pause=0.5] This room is connected to the one where you were born,[pause=0.3] but I had to make you travel across the surface to test your abilities. #id:67
 - Wait, can you explain me what did I just do up there ? #id:68
-	 demeter: You started to repair what the humans did on this planet... This will be very long, I hope you enjoyed it ! #id:69
-- Sorry but what is the point of all of that ? #id:6a
-	 demeter: I'm sorry that you are lost my child... Know that what you do is very important to me, to my friend and to the planet itself ! Since the humans are gone, we kinda all fell into despair... #id:6b
-demeter: Wait.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] You don't know what humans are ! Of course since your data was corrupted, I have erased a lot of it. #id:6c
-demeter: The humans are living creatures that are...[pause=0.5] Different than plants. They were more thinking and moving like us. In a sense, they were very cute creatures that only lived less than a century, and reproduce once in their lifetime. #id:6d
-demeter: One human has a relative intelligence, but don't be fooled, together, they did great things, in facts, they invented and created us. #id:6e
-demeter: Long ago, they discovered this planet. It was not like it is now, plants were everywhere! But then.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] They.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] I.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] #id:6f
+	 demeter: You have begun to fix what the humans once inflicted on this planet.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] It will be a very long process,[pause=0.2] I hope you enjoyed it ! #id:69
+- Sorry, but what is the point of all of that ? #id:6a
+	 demeter: I'm sorry that you are lost my child.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] Just know that what you are doing is very important to me and the planet itself ![pause=0.5] Since humans are gone,[pause=0.2] we kinda all fell into despair... #id:6b
+demeter: Wait.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] You don't know what humans are ![pause=0.5] Of course,[pause=0.2] since your database was corrupted I had to erase most of it. #id:6c
+demeter: Humans are living creatures that are.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] Different than plants.[pause=0.5] They were mostly thinking and moving like us.[pause=0.5] Somehow,[pause=0.2] they were very cute creatures,[pause=0.2] that only lived for less than a century. #id:6d
+demeter: One human has a relative intelligence,[pause=0.2] but don't be fooled,[pause=0.2] together,[pause=0.2] they did great things.[pause=0.5] In facts,[pause=0.2] they created us. #id:6e
+demeter: A long time ago,[pause=0.2] they discovered this planet.[pause=0.5] It was very different,[pause=0.2] plants were everywhere ![pause=0.5] But then.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] They.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] I.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] #id:6f
 - What ? #id:70
 - Are you lagging? #id:71
 - Take your time #id:72
-demeter: Humans had one big problem. Together, they built great things, but sometimes the great things weren't very good for the environment, or for them. #id:73
+demeter: Humans had one major flaw.[pause=0.5] Together,[pause=0.2] they built great things,[pause=0.2] but sometimes great things had a bad impact on the environment and even themselves. #id:73
 - Where are they now ? #id:74
-	 demeter: I prefer not talk about that for now... But don't worry, they can't wound this planet anymore. #id:75
+	 demeter: I prefer not to talk about that for now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] But don't worry,[pause=0.2] they can no longer harm this planet. #id:75
 - What happened ? #id:76
-	 demeter: Sorry my child, I'm not ready to talk about that for now... You'll have your answers when you meet me. #id:77
-- Can I know what is this shiny engine just in front of me ? #id:78
-demeter: This machine in front of you is a planetary ship ! The model's name is the [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color], and I tweaked it to recharge on vegetal energy ! However, as you may know, this energy isn't very present around this planet. But let's continue on board, shall we ? #id:79
+	 demeter: Sorry my child,[pause=0.3] I'm not ready to talk about that for now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] You'll have your answers when you meet me. #id:77
+- Can I know what is this shiny machine just in front of me ? #id:78
+demeter: The machine in front of you is a planetary ship ![pause=0.5] This model is called [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color],[pause=0.3] I tweaked it to recharge on vegetal energy ![pause=0.5] However,[pause=0.2] as you may know,[pause=0.2] this type of energy is uncommon on this planet.[pause=0.5] But let's continue on board,[pause=0.2] shall we ? #id:79
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