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dialogs/timelines/gameplay_related/demeter_astra_failed.dtl

@@ -6,17 +6,18 @@ demeter: It seems that you ran out of energy.[pause=0.5].[pause=0.5]. #id:20
 - I'm sorry... #id:21
 - That's really hard ! #id:22
 - I'm doing my best ! #id:23
-demeter: It's ok [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ![pause=0.5] I spent years waiting for this moment,[pause=0.2] I can wait more ! #id:24
-demeter: I found you a new body,[pause=0.2] and a new ship is waiting you outside,[pause=0.2] but I'm afraid I couldn't get your seeds.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] I hope you find new ones ! #id:25
+demeter: It's ok [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ![pause=0.5] I have spent years waiting for this moment,[pause=0.2] I can wait more ! #id:24
+demeter: I found you a new body,[pause=0.2] and a new ship is waiting for you outside,[pause=0.2] but I'm afraid I couldn't get your seeds.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] I hope you'll find new ones ! #id:25
 demeter: Do you need some advices ? #id:26
-- No, I'm ok ! #id:27
+- No, I'm ok. #id:27
 - Can I have some explanations on how all of this works again ? #id:28
-	demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.3] you'll arrive in a little yellow zone.[pause=0.5] Its a [b]fertile zone[/b],[pause=0.3] created by the return of the [color=#119758][b]Talion[/b][/color].[pause=0.5] This is in this zone and only there where you can plant [b]seeds[/b]. #id:29
-	demeter: Then you'll have to get [b]seeds[/b].[pause=0.5] To do that,[pause=0.3] nothing more simple,[pause=0.3] take your shovel tool,[pause=0.3] and you smash some stones ![pause=0.5] Preferably those with yellow cristals on it,[pause=0.3] it's the [b][color=#119758]Talion[/color] veins[/b]. #id:2a
-	demeter: Each time you use a tool or plant a seed,[pause=0.3] you'll spend one [b]energy[/b] charge.[pause=0.5] When your out of it,[pause=0.3] you can just go recharge on the [b]recharge station[/b] you'll find near the entrance.[pause=0.5] Each time you recharge,[pause=0.3] time will pass.[pause=0.5] One day in fact (yes, you don't have a good battery),[pause=0.3] and plants will grow ! #id:2b
-	demeter: You have to obtain enough [b]plant points[/b] to fill the [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color] tanks.[pause=0.5] Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. #id:2c
-	demeter: And yes,[pause=0.3] I almost forgot ![pause=0.5] Some plants can develop [b]mutations[/b] that affect their points or behavior.[pause=0.5] You can get these mutations on new seeds by harvesting plants,[pause=0.3] and gain better ones ![pause=0.5] But you'll have to wait for the plants to die,[pause=0.3] or smash them with your shovel when mature. #id:2d
-demeter: Hope I helped ! #id:2e
-demeter: I send you an elevator,[pause=0.3] see you soon ! #id:2f
+	demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.2] you will reach a little yellowish zone.[pause=0.3] It's a [b]fertile zone[/b],[pause=0.3] brought back by the [color=#119758][b]Talion's[/b][/color] power.[pause=0.5] You can only plant [b]seeds[/b] in this zone. #id:29
+	demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you have to get [b]seeds[/b].[pause=0.5] To do so,[pause=0.2] just take your shovel and smash some stones ![pause=0.5] Focus on those having yellow crystals on it,[pause=0.3] these are [color=#119758][b]Talion veins[/b][/color]. #id:2a
+	demeter: Each time you use a tool like the shovel or plant a seed,[pause=0.2] you will spend one [b]energy[/b] charge.[pause=0.5] When you are out of it,[pause=0.2] just go recharge it at the [b]recharge station[/b].[pause=0.5] You will find it near the entrance of the base. #id:2b
+	demeter: Each time you recharge,[pause=0.2] a day will pass,[pause=0.3] your batteries are very inefficient.[pause=0.5] While the day is passing,[pause=0.3] plants will grow !
+	demeter: You have to produce enough [b]plant points[/b] to fill the [color=#FFA617]Internode's[/color] tanks.[pause=0.5] Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. #id:2c
+	demeter: Oh ! [pause=0.3] I almost forgot,[pause=0.3] some plants can [b]mutate[/b].[pause=0.5] These [b]mutations[/b] alter the points and behavior of the plant affected.[pause=0.5] [b]Mutations[/b] can appear while [b]harvesting[/b] mature plants and even become more powerful if you [b]harvest[/b] an already mutated one. #id:2d
+demeter: Hope I helped. #id:2e
+demeter: I'm sending you an elevator,[pause=0.3] see you soon ! #id:2f
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