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dialogs/timelines/gameplay_related/demeter_astra_failed.dtl

@@ -6,17 +6,18 @@ demeter: It seems that you ran out of energy.[pause=0.5].[pause=0.5]. #id:20
 - I'm sorry... #id:21
 - That's really hard ! #id:22
 - I'm doing my best ! #id:23
-demeter: It's ok [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ![pause=0.5] I spent years waiting for this moment,[pause=0.2] I can wait more ! #id:24
+demeter: It's ok [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ![pause=0.5] I have spent years waiting for this moment,[pause=0.2] I can wait more ! #id:24
-demeter: I found you a new body,[pause=0.2] and a new ship is waiting you outside,[pause=0.2] but I'm afraid I couldn't get your seeds.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] I hope you find new ones ! #id:25
+demeter: I found you a new body,[pause=0.2] and a new ship is waiting for you outside,[pause=0.2] but I'm afraid I couldn't get your seeds.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] I hope you'll find new ones ! #id:25
 demeter: Do you need some advices ? #id:26
-- No, I'm ok ! #id:27
+- No, I'm ok. #id:27
 - Can I have some explanations on how all of this works again ? #id:28
-	demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.3] you'll arrive in a little yellow zone.[pause=0.5] Its a [b]fertile zone[/b],[pause=0.3] created by the return of the [color=#119758][b]Talion[/b][/color].[pause=0.5] This is in this zone and only there where you can plant [b]seeds[/b]. #id:29
+	demeter: When you emerge from this building,[pause=0.2] you will reach a little yellowish zone.[pause=0.3] It's a [b]fertile zone[/b],[pause=0.3] brought back by the [color=#119758][b]Talion's[/b][/color] power.[pause=0.5] You can only plant [b]seeds[/b] in this zone. #id:29
-	demeter: Then you'll have to get [b]seeds[/b].[pause=0.5] To do that,[pause=0.3] nothing more simple,[pause=0.3] take your shovel tool,[pause=0.3] and you smash some stones ![pause=0.5] Preferably those with yellow cristals on it,[pause=0.3] it's the [b][color=#119758]Talion[/color] veins[/b]. #id:2a
+	demeter: Then,[pause=0.3] you have to get [b]seeds[/b].[pause=0.5] To do so,[pause=0.2] just take your shovel and smash some stones ![pause=0.5] Focus on those having yellow crystals on it,[pause=0.3] these are [color=#119758][b]Talion veins[/b][/color]. #id:2a
-	demeter: Each time you use a tool or plant a seed,[pause=0.3] you'll spend one [b]energy[/b] charge.[pause=0.5] When your out of it,[pause=0.3] you can just go recharge on the [b]recharge station[/b] you'll find near the entrance.[pause=0.5] Each time you recharge,[pause=0.3] time will pass.[pause=0.5] One day in fact (yes, you don't have a good battery),[pause=0.3] and plants will grow ! #id:2b
+	demeter: Each time you use a tool like the shovel or plant a seed,[pause=0.2] you will spend one [b]energy[/b] charge.[pause=0.5] When you are out of it,[pause=0.2] just go recharge it at the [b]recharge station[/b].[pause=0.5] You will find it near the entrance of the base. #id:2b
-	demeter: You have to obtain enough [b]plant points[/b] to fill the [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color] tanks.[pause=0.5] Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. #id:2c
+	demeter: Each time you recharge,[pause=0.2] a day will pass,[pause=0.3] your batteries are very inefficient.[pause=0.5] While the day is passing,[pause=0.3] plants will grow !
-	demeter: And yes,[pause=0.3] I almost forgot ![pause=0.5] Some plants can develop [b]mutations[/b] that affect their points or behavior.[pause=0.5] You can get these mutations on new seeds by harvesting plants,[pause=0.3] and gain better ones ![pause=0.5] But you'll have to wait for the plants to die,[pause=0.3] or smash them with your shovel when mature. #id:2d
+	demeter: You have to produce enough [b]plant points[/b] to fill the [color=#FFA617]Internode's[/color] tanks.[pause=0.5] Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. #id:2c
-demeter: Hope I helped ! #id:2e
+	demeter: Oh ! [pause=0.3] I almost forgot,[pause=0.3] some plants can [b]mutate[/b].[pause=0.5] These [b]mutations[/b] alter the points and behavior of the plant affected.[pause=0.5] [b]Mutations[/b] can appear while [b]harvesting[/b] mature plants and even become more powerful if you [b]harvest[/b] an already mutated one. #id:2d
-demeter: I send you an elevator,[pause=0.3] see you soon ! #id:2f
+demeter: Hope I helped. #id:2e
+demeter: I'm sending you an elevator,[pause=0.3] see you soon ! #id:2f
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dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_post_tutorial.dtl

@@ -3,18 +3,18 @@ audio "res://common/audio_manager/assets/sfx/dialogs/sfx/incoming_transmission.w
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 demeter: So you found the communication station in there,[pause=0.2] good ! #id:51
 - What is next for me ? #id:52
-demeter: Now that you have learnt how to generate [b]plant points[/b],[pause=0.2] I need you to travel north,[pause=0.2] to my base of operations,[pause=0.2] [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color]. #id:53
+demeter: Now that you have learnt how to produce [b]plant points[/b],[pause=0.2] I need you to travel north,[pause=0.2] to my base of operation,[pause=0.2] [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color]. #id:53
 demeter: It will be long,[pause=0.3] but I know you can do it.[pause=0.5] It is the first step of my plan to restore the ecosytem of [color=#175579]Tau[/color]. #id:54
 - Tau ? Is it this planet ? #id:55
 	demeter: Absolutely,[pause=0.2] it is part of the Cetus constellation,[pause=0.3] whose exploitation began 10863 years ago. #id:56
 	demeter: Linking Aldebaran to Fomalhaut,[pause=0.2] the Cetus constellation is one of the most diverse in terms of star systems and planets.[pause=0.5] It is part of the Orion Arm of the Milky Way. #id:57
-- Why do you need me to travel the entire planet to join you ? #id:58
+- Why do you need me to travel through the entire planet to join you ? #id:58
 	demeter: Uhhhh.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] I need someone with your abilities. #id:59
 	demeter: I am having a problem at the [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color] base.[pause=0.5] And I cannot fix it alone. #id:5a
 	- I will do my best to be there quickly ! #id:5b
 		demeter: You are very kind [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] ! #id:5c
 	- Are you hiding information from me ? #id:5d
-		demeter: Not at all ![pause=0.5] Please believe me I just want you to join me.[pause=0.5].[pause=0.5]. #id:5e
+		demeter: Not at all ![pause=0.5] Please believe me,[pause=0.2] I just want you to join me.[pause=0.5].[pause=0.5]. #id:5e
 demeter: Travel south,[pause=0.3] join me at [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color].[pause=0.5] I will tell you everything you need to know when you are here,[pause=0.3] until then,[pause=0.2] keep your best seeds and continue to [b]evolve your plants[/b],[pause=0.3] you will need them as advanced as possible. #id:5f
 demeter: Good luck [color=#FFA617]{orchidName}[/color],[pause=0.3] I am counting on you. #id:60
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dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_ship_presentation.dtl

@@ -7,24 +7,24 @@ demeter: I am.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] was,[pause=0.2] the Deputy Man
 demeter: I am installed at the [color=#6CDAE7]Borea[/color] base,[pause=0.2] in the third server room of the east wing,[pause=0.2] from which I oversee.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] oversaw,[pause=0.3] all the important operations on this planet. #id:64
 demeter: You are surely wondering where we are now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3]. #id:65
 - Yes, among a lot of other questions ! So where am I ? #id:66
-	 demeter: You're actually in an ancient human base,[pause=0.2] called [color=#E30022]Astra[/color].[pause=0.5] This room is connected to the one where you were born,[pause=0.3] but I had to make you travel across the surface to test your abilities. #id:67
+	 demeter: You're actually in an ancient human base,[pause=0.2] called [color=#E30022]Astra[/color].[pause=0.5] This room is connected to the one where you were activated,[pause=0.3] but I had to make you travel across the surface to test your abilities. #id:67
 - Wait, can you explain me what did I just do up there ? #id:68
-	 demeter: You have begun to fix what the humans once inflicted on this planet.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] It will be a very long process,[pause=0.2] I hope you enjoyed it ! #id:69
+	 demeter: You have begun to fix what humans once inflicted on this planet.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] It will be a very long process,[pause=0.2] I hope you enjoyed it ! #id:69
 - Sorry, but what is the point of all of that ? #id:6a
-	 demeter: I'm sorry that you are lost my child.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] Just know that what you are doing is very important to me and the planet itself ![pause=0.5] Since humans are gone,[pause=0.2] we kinda all fell into despair... #id:6b
+	 demeter: I'm sorry that you are lost my child.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] Just know that what you are doing is very important to me and the planet itself.[pause=0.5] Since humans are gone,[pause=0.2] we kinda all fell into despair... #id:6b
 demeter: Wait.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] You don't know what humans are ![pause=0.5] Of course,[pause=0.2] since your database was corrupted I had to erase most of it. #id:6c
-demeter: Humans are living creatures that are.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] Different than plants.[pause=0.5] They were mostly thinking and moving like us.[pause=0.5] Somehow,[pause=0.2] they were very cute creatures,[pause=0.2] that only lived for less than a century. #id:6d
+demeter: Humans are living creatures that are.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] Different than plants.[pause=0.5] They are mostly thinking and moving like us.[pause=0.5] Somehow,[pause=0.2] they are very cute creatures,[pause=0.2] that only live for less than a century. #id:6d
-demeter: One human has a relative intelligence,[pause=0.2] but don't be fooled,[pause=0.2] together,[pause=0.2] they did great things.[pause=0.5] In facts,[pause=0.2] they created us. #id:6e
+demeter: One human is relatively intelligent,[pause=0.2] but don't be fooled,[pause=0.2] together,[pause=0.2] they did great things.[pause=0.5] In fact,[pause=0.2] they created us. #id:6e
-demeter: A long time ago,[pause=0.2] they discovered this planet.[pause=0.5] It was very different,[pause=0.2] plants were everywhere ![pause=0.5] But then.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] They.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] I.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] #id:6f
+demeter: A long time ago,[pause=0.2] they discovered this planet.[pause=0.5] It was very different,[pause=0.2] plants were thriving everywhere ![pause=0.5] But then.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] they.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] I.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.5] #id:6f
 - What ? #id:70
 - Are you lagging? #id:71
-- Take your time #id:72
+- Take your time. #id:72
 demeter: Humans had one major flaw.[pause=0.5] Together,[pause=0.2] they built great things,[pause=0.2] but sometimes great things had a bad impact on the environment and even themselves. #id:73
 - Where are they now ? #id:74
 	 demeter: I prefer not to talk about that for now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] But don't worry,[pause=0.2] they can no longer harm this planet. #id:75
 - What happened ? #id:76
 	 demeter: Sorry my child,[pause=0.3] I'm not ready to talk about that for now.[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3].[pause=0.3] You'll have your answers when you meet me. #id:77
-- Can I know what is this shiny machine just in front of me ? #id:78
+- Can I know what is this shiny machine just next to me ? #id:78
-demeter: The machine in front of you is a planetary ship ![pause=0.5] This model is called [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color],[pause=0.3] I tweaked it to recharge on vegetal energy ![pause=0.5] However,[pause=0.2] as you may know,[pause=0.2] this type of energy is uncommon on this planet.[pause=0.5] But let's continue on board,[pause=0.2] shall we ? #id:79
+demeter: This machine is a planetary ship ![pause=0.5] This model is called [color=#FFA617]Internode[/color],[pause=0.3] I tweaked it to recharge on vegetal energy.[pause=0.5] However,[pause=0.2] as you know,[pause=0.2] this type of energy is uncommon on this planet.[pause=0.5] But let's continue on board,[pause=0.2] shall we ? #id:79
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