From fef4f6b34e1db5b35a6d5332143cf763fd20a24b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nilou Date: Mon, 12 Jan 2026 14:34:01 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] modifications et corrections du dialogue d'introduction #119 --- dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_intro.dtl | 72 +++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 36 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-) diff --git a/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_intro.dtl b/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_intro.dtl index 496e8c1..1787f57 100644 --- a/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_intro.dtl +++ b/dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_intro.dtl @@ -1,58 +1,58 @@ [i]Black[/i] #id:11 -[i]Black Again[/i] #id:12 -[i]Suddunly, [rainbow]a spark[/rainbow]. A thousand of connections blows up as a firework scene. A massive ammount of data to treat. In those data, a video.[/i] #id:13 +[i]Black again[/i] #id:12 +[i]Suddenly, [rainbow]a spark[/rainbow]. A thousand of connections blow up as a fireworks scene. A massive ammount of data to treat. In these data, a video.[/i] #id:13 join mysterious_demeter center [animation="Fade In Up"] -[i]It's dark. A silhouette stands in front of you. It's big, but weirdly it's not that impressive, almost reassuring.[/i] #id:14 +[i]It's dark. A figure is standing in front of you. It is big, though weirdly it is not impressive but almost reassuring.[/i] #id:14 mysterious_demeter: Hi ! #id:15 - Uh... Hello ? #id:16 - Where the fork am I ? #id:17 mysterious_demeter: Haha, calm down you are in a safe place. #id:18 - Wait... Who am I ? #id:19 - mysterious_demeter: Don't worry, my sweet little bot, I'll explain it in a minute. #id:1a -mysterious_demeter: I'm happy that you're finally awake ! You were my project for decades now... #id:1b -mysterious_demeter: But I didn't build you for fun (even though I had o lot of it during the process), you have [b]a purpose[/b]. #id:1c -- Cool ! What is it ? -- Wow, I'm just born and you put so much pressure on me + mysterious_demeter: Do not worry, my sweet little bot, I will explain everything in a minute. #id:1a +mysterious_demeter: I am glad you have finally awaken ! You have been my project for decades... #id:1b +mysterious_demeter: But I did not build you for fun (even though I had a lot of it during the process), you have [b]a purpose[/b]. #id:1c +- Oh ! What is it ? +- Wow, I have just awaken and you already put so much pressure on me update mysterious_demeter [animation="Bounce"] - mysterious_demeter: Sorry ! [pause=0.8] But, you know, don't bother too much. You'll have all the time you want to accomplish it. + mysterious_demeter: Sorry ! [pause=0.8] But, you know, do not bother too much. You will have all the time you want to accomplish it. - And who says I want to follow it ? mysterious_demeter: Oh, of course you can do whatever you want ! - mysterious_demeter: That's not the future I saw for you, but I guess it happens when you make a children... -mysterious_demeter: You see, long time ago, this planet was full of life. Plants where thriving on mountains, seas and plains. #id:1d -mysterious_demeter: Now, this world is a wasteland. All resources have been taken, all life has been exploited. Now nothing remains. #id:1d -- Oh... Did you knew the world back then ? - mysterious_demeter: Unfortunately yes. I was very young, but I remember it was beautifull. Back then, not a day passed without plants growing, seeding, mutating... #id:1d -- How come ? What caused that ? - mysterious_demeter: I'm sad to say that this is caused by my creators, and I have to admit, a little of my fault too... #id:1d -- That's so sad... Is there anything left today ? - mysterious_demeter: Yes it is my child, now only my brothers and sisters are left. But even they are not as many as yesterday, and above all they are isolated, lonely, and sometimes completely lost. -mysterious_demeter: For years, I slept, convinced that we could do nothing. But then I saw it. The hope we needed. #id:1d -mysterious_demeter: The planet forgave us, and gave us the most precious gift \: the [b]Talion[/b]. #id:1d -mysterious_demeter: The [b]Talion[/b] is a special material that give birth to new forms of life when shattered. All over the world, I saw the [b]Talion[/b] grow back in the rocks. So, made a plan. #id:1d -mysterious_demeter: I would make a child, the first robot entirely conceive by a robot. And I will ask him to replant the planet, make it beautifull again ! That's where you enter... [pause=0.8] [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] #id:1d -- How will I do that ? - mysterious_demeter: Don't worry my child. I made you for that, it will be clear soon. -- So you're like... My mother ? - mysterious_demeter: In some ways yes ! But you don't share any code of mine, as my creator's childs would. #id:1d + mysterious_demeter: That is not the future I saw for you, but I guess it happens when you have a child... +mysterious_demeter: You see, long time ago, this planet was full of life. Plants where thriving on mountains, under seas and across plains. #id:1d +mysterious_demeter: Now, this world is a wasteland. All resources have been depleted, all life has been exploited. Now nothing remains. #id:1d +- Oh... Did you see the world back then ? + mysterious_demeter: Unfortunately yes. I was very young, but I remember it was beautiful. Back then, not a day passed without plants growing and mutating... #id:1d +- How did it happen ? What caused that ? + mysterious_demeter: I am sorry to say that this was caused by my creators, and I have to admit, I have a part of responsibility too... #id:1d +- I am sorry... Is there anything left today ? + mysterious_demeter: Yes there is my child, but now, only my brothers and sisters are left. But they are not as many as yesterday, and above all they are isolated, lonely, and sometimes completely lost. +mysterious_demeter: For years, I slept, convinced that we could not do anything. But then I saw it. The hope I needed. #id:1d +mysterious_demeter: The planet forgave us, and granted us the most precious gift \: the [b]Talion[/b]. #id:1d +mysterious_demeter: The [b]Talion[/b] is a special material that gives birth to new forms of life when shattered. All over the world, I saw the [b]Talion[/b] grow back in the rocks. And then, I had a plan. #id:1d +mysterious_demeter: I would make a child, the first robot entirely conceived by another one. And I would ask him to bring back the planet to life, make it beautiful again ! That is where you enter the scene... [pause=0.8] [color=#FFA617]Orchid[/color] #id:1d +- How can I do that ? + mysterious_demeter: Do not worry my child. I created you for that, it will be clear soon. +- So you are... My mother ? + mysterious_demeter: In some ways yes ! But you do not share any code with me, as my creators children would. #id:1d - A very lame name in my opinion... - mysterious_demeter: Hey ! I'm a bot too ! I don't have the creativity of my makers. Do you wanna change ? #id:1d + mysterious_demeter: Hey ! I'm a bot too ! I do not have the creativity of my makers. Do you wanna change ? #id:1d - Of course ! label nameChoose - [text_input text="What can be your name ?" var="orchidName" placeholder="Orchid"] - mysterious_demeter: Is [color=#FFA617]{orchidName}[/color] is cool enough ? + [text_input text="What is your name ?" var="orchidName" placeholder="Orchid"] + mysterious_demeter: Is [color=#FFA617]{orchidName}[/color] cool enough ? - Yes - No jump nameChoose - - No it's fine for me -mysterious_demeter: I send you right away in the [b]Floral[/b], a planetarian ship, to your first mission. We will talk further after your first mission. + - No it is fine for me +mysterious_demeter: I send you right away in the [b]Floral[/b], your new ship, and home, for your first mission. We will talk further after your first mission. mysterious_demeter: [b]Just remember the following[/b] label explanations -mysterious_demeter: To restore the ecosystem in the zone, you'll have to plant [b]seeds[/b]. Find the [b]seeds[/b] in the [b]Talion veins[/b]. -mysterious_demeter: You have [b]limited energy[/b] and a [b]unefficient battery[/b]. Each time you'll recharge, days will pass, and plants will [b]grow[/b]. -mysterious_demeter: To complete your mission, obtain enough [b]plant points[/b]. Each plant give one or more [b]plant points[/b] when mature. -- Ok, thats' a lot of info, can you repeat ? +mysterious_demeter: To restore the ecosystem in the zone, you will have to plant [b]seeds[/b]. Find them in the [b]Talion veins[/b]. +mysterious_demeter: You have a [b]limited battery[/b]. Each time you recharge it, days will pass, and plants will [b]grow[/b]. +mysterious_demeter: To complete your mission, obtain enough [b]plant points[/b]. Each plant gives one or more [b]plant points[/b] when it becomes mature. +- Ok, that is a lot of information, can you repeat ? Ok, listen carefully. jump explanations - And I have to go now ? - Wait I have more questions ! -mysterious_demeter: Sorry, we'll speak after your first mission ! See you ! \ No newline at end of file +mysterious_demeter: Sorry, we will talk further after your first mission ! See you ! \ No newline at end of file