corrections du dialogue d'outro et d'échec #125 #128

dialogs/timelines/story/demeter_outro.dtl

@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ demeter: What else do you want to know ?
 label debut_dialogue
 - Who am I ? | [if {whoamI} == "false"] [else="hide"]
 	demeter: I can not answer this question,[pause=0.3] not fully at least.[pause=0.3] I created you,[pause=0.2] and I am pretty sure you are the first artificial intelligence entirely conceived by another one.
-	demeter: So you are indeed a robot,[pause=0.2] but this detail makes you different of any of us.[pause=0.3] We all woke up with a specific purpose in our eternal existences,[pause=0.2] but you.[pause=0.2].[pause=0.2].[pause=0.3] do not have one.[pause=0.3] By the way,[pause=0.2] I am glad that you are here now,[pause=0.2] I hope you do not feel forced to.
+	demeter: So you are indeed a robot,[pause=0.2] but this detail makes you different from any of us.[pause=0.3] We all woke up with a specific purpose in our eternal existences,[pause=0.2] but you.[pause=0.2].[pause=0.2].[pause=0.3] do not have one.[pause=0.3] By the way,[pause=0.2] I am glad that you are here now,[pause=0.2] I hope you do not feel forced to.
 	- It is a pleasure to help you mother !
 		demeter: I am glad you are not mad at me !
-	- So you are granting me free will and excepting that I obey you right away ?
+	- So you are granting me free will and expecting me to obey you right away ?
 		demeter: Yes,[pause=0.2] that was the plan.[pause=0.2].[pause=0.2].[pause=0.3] I know that was not the best solution,[pause=0.2] but here you are,[pause=0.2] so I guess it worked ?
-	- Mmmh, you just kept informations until I was here, that is not very nice of yours.
+	- Mmmh, you just kept information until I was here, that is not very nice of you.
 		demeter: I understand your resentment [color=#FFA617]{orchidName}[/color],[pause=0.2] I just did what I thought was the best for you.
 	set {whoamI} = "true"
 	jump suite_dialogue
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ label debut_dialogue
 	- Where are the humans now ?
 		demeter: Humans need organic energy to subsist,[pause=0.2] when the last plant died,[pause=0.2] they abandoned us,[pause=0.3] to travel through the outer space.[pause=0.3] For a while we received information about them,[pause=0.2] trying to find a new home,[pause=0.2] but it has been a while since I received a transmission from them.
 	- What did you do ?
-		demeter: I[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4] misjudged the situation,[pause=0.4] and did not execute my tasks properly.[pause=0.3] I failed in a way I did not predict,[pause=0.2] and since then I am processing on how I could have done better.[pause=0.3] This task used 72% of my processing power this last decade.
+		demeter: I[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4].[pause=0.4] misjudged the situation,[pause=0.4] and did not execute my tasks properly.[pause=0.3] I failed in a way I did not predict,[pause=0.2] and since then I have been processing on how I could have done better.[pause=0.3] This task has used 72% of my processing power this last decade.
 	set {whathappened} = "true"
 	jump suite_dialogue
 - Where are the other robots ? | [if {theothers} == "false"] [else="hide"]
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ label debut_dialogue
 	set {theothers} = "true"
 	jump suite_dialogue
 - Why did you bring me from the north pole ? | [if {whynorth} == "false"]
-	demeter: It was my only choice.[pause=0.3] I am not a factory artificial intelligence but a research and management one,[pause=0.2] and even if I was,[pause=0.3] I did not have the equipment here.
+	demeter: It was my only choice.[pause=0.3] I am not a factory artificial intelligence but a research and management one,[pause=0.2] and even if I were,[pause=0.3] I did not have the equipment here.
 	demeter: The only place where I could have access to a suitable body for you was the [color=#6CDAE7]Borea base[/color],[pause=0.2] a manufacturing facility.[pause=0.3] It was not ideal but it was the only solution.
 	set {whynorth} = "true"
 	jump suite_dialogue